Ohhhh that was some good lemony goodness. I really liked how there was that slight difference of desire between the two Bella J's. As soon as he caught the sent of the one that is taking over his Bella he couldn't control himself I really liked that touch. And now you leave us with a huge cliffie! Will this Bella J get things rolling for the real one in this universe? What will she do?? Can't wait to find out!