Yay! Second chapter is here!

Boy, that was difficult to read, I couldn't help but cringed when I read the E/B lemon scene(s). I guess after reading so many Jasper/Bella fics, I've gotten used to just seeing lemons of Bella and Jasper. But, it was still an awesome chapter, Edward sure looked like he lost control for a minute or at least came close. I suppose Jasper is going to have to save Bella from Edward's dark side at some point in the story, right? I can't wait until we finally get to see Bella with Jasper. Ugh, I hate the torture and the waiting, lol. I suppose there will be more E/B lemons, right? A part of me doesn't want to see E/B lemons anymore, but if its necessary to help the story along I guess I'll have to get use to it or just skip the love scenes. Anyway, please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

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Jan 21, 2010
by: Cullen818

Thanks for reading. I appreciate it. As I have said, the story starts out E/B and that's necessary for where I'm headed. This being my 5th J/B story, I needed to come up with something different. There will be a few more lemons with E/B, but they certainly aren't the focus of the story. Even though it's not Jasper, I still put everything I have into writing those scenes. I hope you'll continue on to see where I'm headed. The story will shift to J/B in a few chapters.

I'll post soon:)


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