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by FlowerChild67

Bella should mention the fact that Alice couldn't "see" the baby because she was a hybrid - maybe that would clear things up? :/


Anyways, my favorite line so far: "I want a sister. And I want her tomorrow."

Gotta love Kate!! :)

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Jan 28, 2010
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You found a hole!
by: Addicted2Twylyte

Darn! Even after having two betas read this, and I've re-read it hundreds of times, you found a hole! I forgot about Alice - how could I forget Alice? Oh well, when I'm famous and republish this as the "Expanded and Revised" version, I'll factor Alice into the whole baby equation. :)

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